Song with no name
He was a fine machine
That caught my eyes
Looking good, I’m like “my oh my”
Ladies’ take a look at him
Give a second look
He’ll sweep you of your feet
Wishing’ like you want more
Remember…
Day in and out, I walk him over
Heart was beating, mind was blowing
And I’m out of words
Take it easy and slow
Kiss on cheek is all I have
Wishing’ and he want more
Cuz jimmy you got me thinking
O I’m Writing a song
And I’m singing
Singing a song with no name
They say I’m crazy, they say I’m mad
But baby that’s just me
It’s more that a day
When you need a comfort
Wishing’ like it’s alright
Heart is golden and heaven smile
And it’s cold out
Time turn over, soon be over
You’re Day in and out
Ease and moment everything
I feel alright, when I see you around
And I’m singing
Singing a song with no name
They say I’m crazy, they say I’m mad
But baby o baby that’s just me
2006-12-08 06:58:24 · 3 answers · asked by asossin3 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
That is actually very good. I love the "its more that a day" verse.
It ranges through a young girls emotions (I'm a lad but still ;-)
I think you have something here if you can get the right music to go with it.
I'd say 8-9 for lyrics but choice of music could take it to 10 or (sorry to say) drop it down to 6-7. Have to warn you on that cos you have a gem here and strong advice is whats needed. Hope you get something out of these lyrics cos they ARE good.
2006-12-08 11:15:57 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
6 outta 1-10
2006-12-08 07:00:29 · answer #2 · answered by Nahum 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say 7 out-of-10. I thought it was pretty good actually. I write songs too!! So, I would know a cool song when I hear one. This was/is a cool song. AWESOME!!!
2006-12-08 07:05:40 · answer #3 · answered by $C3N3 . FR3$H 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋