One of my many poems written after my heart was broken
My heart from now is a private road
No thoroughfare
No heavy load
No slow traffic
No graphic details
Cold or collision
No more stories to make me end
I'll always love you, still you are mine
Why do you have to take so much time calling me?
I just wanted it to be easy like
Sunday morning
Snow falls in silence and covers the green
Still you can see where the birds have been
Hungry but alive and free
Waiting
2006-12-07 23:42:46 · 6 answers · asked by Kitty 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
There once was a girl called Sexkitten,
Who asked people to rate what she'd written,
Alas, it was sh1te,
But try as she might,
It'll never be published in Britain.
But perhaps the US might have it....
2006-12-07 23:50:30 · answer #1 · answered by Ecko 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I kind of lost it at the 'No more stories to make my end', could be that I just haven't had enough coffee yet. ^^
Sounds good though, I'm not all too much into poetry, but I like this one. I believe you've done a good job capturing the emotion I think you're trying to express.
Of course each poem will leave a personal impression on everyone, no one will feel the same, but to me it sounds good. :)
2006-12-07 23:51:16 · answer #2 · answered by GrammarCtrl 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
they say that if you love someone set them free, if you were meant to be 2gether they will come back!
In the mean time keep expressing yourself n this time in a happy way.Coz if you can think it n write it you can do it.Write me another of your poems n make me smile!
2006-12-07 23:55:50 · answer #3 · answered by gorgeous.pw 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice. Keep up the writing.
2006-12-07 23:44:36 · answer #4 · answered by Jazzys_mom 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
deary me.just to say if it was karaoke the pub would be empty by now.
2006-12-08 02:50:30 · answer #5 · answered by briangimma 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice one keep it up
2006-12-07 23:51:58 · answer #6 · answered by oG33MANo 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋