Fly Away
The sun was glisining through out the sky
As i carefully watch how the birds fly by
I think it's nice to be a bird i wish that was me
To fly anywhere you want and to be free
To hear no hatered over color or size
To feel no pain, misory, and lies
To get away from things that put you down
To run away from fears that make a frown
To fly far away and be alone
Untill your ready to fly back home
2006-12-07 13:27:50 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
maybe i should cut the to's.... um... yeah i think i should....
2006-12-07 13:32:29 · update #1
maybe i should cut the to's.... um... yeah i think i should....
2006-12-07 13:32:39 · update #2
There are some spelling errors, so use spell check. I like the poem. I like birds, too. 8 .
Summer Wings
Drawn by the wings
of a summer breeze
he shall fly.
A creature forever free
in search of sweeter flowers.
Must you go, hummingbird?
2006-12-07 13:37:25 · answer #1 · answered by honiebyrd 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7-8
2006-12-07 13:31:49 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
6 and a half out of 10.
2006-12-07 13:53:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's very nice, I give it an 8.
Be blessed.
2006-12-07 13:36:24 · answer #4 · answered by Decent 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
right now it's an 8...edit it...work on the cadence (and spellin') and it could be a 10...
2006-12-07 13:34:21 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it an 8.5. I really like it
2006-12-07 13:31:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋