What I Love About You
I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I love the way you kiss me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.
I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
And the way you're always there.
I love the way you touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And glad that you are mine.
- Crystal Jansen -
2006-12-07 12:18:32 · 28 answers · asked by Deleted 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Girl you are fierce
2006-12-07 12:20:48 · answer #1 · answered by Ramsey 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Its amazing! I love it! Your are good. I am also a poet and from one poet to another, put your poem in some contest or something. www.poetry.com
Really keep on writing..
Best Wishes!
2006-12-07 20:22:59 · answer #2 · answered by NoName 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I like your love poem. Continue writing and inspiring...
Be blessed.
2006-12-07 20:33:03 · answer #3 · answered by Decent 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh, I think it's really good. The only semi-good poem I wrote was 'Hurting Inside' which was about like..crying and hurting...I think it. I think it's..sweet.
2006-12-07 21:23:48 · answer #4 · answered by Barbiex) 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
these schlubs will tell you they like a mouthful of poo if they think it'll get them ten points. pathetic. them not you. you. mediocre to lower middling with a slight after taste of inanity
2006-12-07 20:25:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I like it very much it expresses exactly how i feel about my bf.
2006-12-07 20:29:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's great! You could probably ask somebody to publish it for you
2006-12-07 20:23:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
2006-12-07 20:20:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sure, it's cool. But I'm not into that lovey-dovey crap. If I was, I'd like it more.
2006-12-07 20:21:04 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sweeettt!! i would love it...but im not really in that lovey stuf right now its very sweet tho
2006-12-07 20:23:42 · answer #10 · answered by oolala597 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋