Help i need an idea!!!?

Question

Ok I am writing a novel, it's about this girl named Ashley who died and now must chose which side she wants to be on, the demons of Hell or angels or Heaven, the reason why she gets to pick these sides is becasue she was a good/bad girl. So she choses the demons but then her sister is in Hell and told her she is a fool to pick this side, so she leaves the demons and becomes the leader of a neutral group then she finds out that a angel is in her body, (the angel is Alexiel) after she finds out that she has to lead an army to protect the Earth from the Final Battle (Judgement Day or when the angels and demons fight on the Earth for the last time). She then goes to the hospital becasue of a life threating disease and Alexiel has to get out of Ashley's body and she does, but Ashley runs away and is not for sure who she is and is slowing dieing. Can you please give me a idea? Thanks.

Answer 1

Ashley need to find an ally to help her through the climactic battle before the novel finishes. Perhaps a handsome doctor from the hospital who has fallen in love with her and wants to help her survive the illness. He doesn't know what he's getting himself into into at first, but it all becomes clear. (What neither of them know is that Alexiel actually arranged for it to happen as part of her guardian angel duties)
The doctor suggests that a way to stand a fighting chance in the final battle would be to help the forces for good by tackling the angel of death - he's had a lot of experience with this demon in the hospital although he never realised at the time. Ashley and the doctor finally overcome the angel of death and this gives the good forces in the battle just enough strength to overcome and win.

Have fun wherever you take your characters!

PS (Really good point made by the person below but one. Ashley is already dead so she can't be dying slowly from some disease. You're going to need some other crisis - perhaps something that's threatening her immortal soul?)

Answer 2

Try to come up with a main character for your story. Write down a description - male, female, eye color, etc. etc.

Then take this character and imagine then in some odd place or scenario – anything goes! Write down ideas on what would have to happen to your character or how they would react to the scenario you placed them in.

You can do this for multiple characters if you like.

This may seem futile, but it will help you flesh out some characters and give you insight into what you may want to happen to this type of character in a potential story. You may even come up with multiple story lines!

Strong well crafted main characters can inspire readers to love your story as well as drive you to write a great story for these imagined beings so be in! :-)

Answer 3

I'm not sure what you want an idea for? but so far your story is very hard to follow, But I suppose it is just an overview of it. Can you be more specific about what you need ideas about.
Just a thought but Ashley can't die again, even if an angel is inside her, angels can't die either. and they don't get diseases.

Answer 4

Now she need to find an partner to help her find her way and the answers. Enter hot, confused guy. Who of course is harbouring a demon in him, (not to be discovered until later). Romance and intrigue ensue.
Good luck it sounds really interesting. You caught my attention.

Answer 5

insert in a honey bee that stings her to death... :)
idk, i'm not exactly what you call creative but i think you should write a book on something other than hell/heaven. i usually avoid reading them b/c they're all the same, good prevails after the main charecter is put through temptation or whatever

Answer 6

What the hell are you talking about...are you for real. I could barely get through one paragraph forget a whole novel!

Answer 7

Hope you have a good editor, 'cause your writing needs a lot of work.