okay! hope you like it!
Watching her slowly
slowly slip away
it's happenning more and more
growing every day
Chorus:
should i let her
should I watch her fall
can you hear me
do i make any sense at all
i mean really
please believe me
seeing is believing anyway
you once made a promise
to never let go
will my heart be broken will I lose you,oh
chorus
find yourself
be yourself
see me
hear me
please believe me
chorus
I can't watch her
I can't watch her fall
you don't hear me
I can't take this anymore I mean really
please just leave me
seeing is believing anyway
seeing is believing anyway
2006-12-07 09:02:05 · 7 answers · asked by starry_eyez70 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
i really like it seriously...send it to a singer n see if they will use it or someitnhg! KEEP WRITING :)
2006-12-07 09:59:36 · answer #1 · answered by sofitch420 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's OK for just reading but I'm sorry it needs to be to music. If you wrote it and it's not yet copyrighted you should definitely not post it here because i know it's sad but they're are tons of people o here that go after unsigned songs and write them down for themselves to sing. It could be good if u PRACTICE PRACTICE AND PRACTICE but that's how the music world is
2006-12-07 09:13:11 · answer #2 · answered by .. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Doesn't sound like Metal to me.
2006-12-07 09:04:33 · answer #3 · answered by animalmother 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depending on your tune .. I can see this as a hit! It is very nice :)
2006-12-07 09:05:25 · answer #4 · answered by mixedchick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are a good song writer, i write songs my self...
2006-12-07 09:11:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you wrote it I highly recommend you to NOT post it here.....Someone can steal your work...!!!! Trust ME!
2006-12-07 09:05:12 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
BOOOOOOO
2006-12-07 09:06:18 · answer #7 · answered by Serj's Daughter 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋