whispers from the past
Laughter from the present
Screams from the future
Its all a mess
Chaotic and hectic
Blurred faces
With no eyes
Static noises
And haunting words
Spinning and spinning
On the axis of the core
A crater opens
And everything falls
Then it swallows and
Then nothing is left.
2006-12-07 08:39:16 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
It is a good poem, but want it is about?
2006-12-07 08:47:32 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If I knew what it was about, I'd say it was great. It needs to be longer, and more concrete.
2006-12-07 16:41:56 · answer #2 · answered by WV girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is very dark ,are you going through something in your life ?
2006-12-07 16:48:06 · answer #3 · answered by probester91 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds nice.
2006-12-07 16:42:21 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad.
2006-12-07 16:46:49 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋