how can I make an intro to this sentences and make them more interesting?

Question

-In life, many of us are challenged with many different things that occur in our life. Some of the challenges that we go through can potentially make us become stronger person but may also cause us to.
-Being challenged with hard times may help in developing one’s characteristics and overcome difficult obstacles. As a character endures many hardships in life, they will achieve many things in life and become a better person. In the novel Welcome to Hard Times, Blue faces many difficult challenges in his life such as being challenged with hard times, developing one’s characteristics, and overcome difficult obstacles.

Answer 1

You need to edit it first. Take out the repetitions, no matter how good they might sound to you. For example, the first sentence

"In life, many of us are challenged with many different things that occur in our life"

Can be boiled down to:

Life's many challenges

Answer 2

"You said "in life twice" in the same sentence-redundant. Just scanning through I saw challenge 3 or 4 times, boring. Punch up your paragraph by using synonyms like "struggling through hard times...." that way you don't repeat yourself. Basic structure is OK. Just need a little pepper.

Answer 3

we are all a product of our own environment you can not pin point how and why we come to the way we end up being ..john lennon was a single child and brought up by his aunt facing tragedies on the way ...he became a beatle with inovation .
then you have another guy brought up in the same situation and he goes out and kills and blames it on his up bringing.you see we are the same yet different in thoughts and mind and sometimes experience does not always lead down the same path.