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I know they are depressing, but that is my style. Thank You!
2006-12-06 15:21:05 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
They're nice, but really depressing. Do you listen to emo music?
2006-12-06 15:22:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are more prose than poetry - lacking cadence & rhyme, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I think they are sad, and raw...
July is my favorite, because I think it displays real writing potential, rather than just the outpouring of pain the others reflect.
Bear in mind, it's just my opinion - no more or less valid than anyone else, and that I'm commenting from a writers point of view, and not about feelings.
If these are about you, I'm so sorry you've been hurt so badly - you express your feelings very well.
2006-12-06 23:30:14 · answer #2 · answered by belmyst 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
they are really good and ya they are depressing.
Let me tell you my dear friend the heart breaking is a virtual phenomenon. Actually it never breaks down - there is a temporary set back only. This is not the end of the world dear. Try look around you and find the beauties which would help you to rebuild your heart.
All the best.
2006-12-06 23:28:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your poems are good in that they obviously come from your heart. Sometimes writing is a good way to understand emotions!
2006-12-06 23:23:54 · answer #4 · answered by probablestars 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love your poems. They made me feel the emotions that you probably felt while writing them. You are a true poet. Keep up the fabulous work!
2006-12-06 23:27:23 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked this one:
Cold tears on my frozen face
Remind me of your embrace.
Cold feet on bare legs.
Chilling hate because you are not there.
Cold love too hard to bear.
Enough to make me want to tear
My own fair icy skin.
At least then i will know the end
2006-12-06 23:23:27 · answer #6 · answered by Electric 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good! I think you can improve with practice though and you will be even better.
2006-12-06 23:24:17 · answer #7 · answered by Sammy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my poetry is depressing too. it's like a diary only i can really decode.
great work though, thumbs up
2006-12-06 23:25:39 · answer #8 · answered by d☻min☺ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good poems, I like the amazing disappearing heart one the most....
2006-12-06 23:26:09 · answer #9 · answered by numb3r_0n3_idiot 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They're good. Just sad. did someone break your heat or something?
2006-12-06 23:25:12 · answer #10 · answered by Neva 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋