Not a day passed,
Not a night passed,
Not a moment passed when I didn't wonder
When i didn't think about "him".
I'm young, but i think i may be in love.
Does he feel the same about me,
And if so,
Is it me he truly loves,
Is it me he truly sees,
Does he see through it,
Or does he simply see nothing more than my mask?
Thanks! :D
2006-12-06 13:35:30 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I liked it.Especially the last line,it got me thinking.
2006-12-06 13:39:06 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-16 12:08:41 · answer #2 · answered by malinowski 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice job, i like the ending
2006-12-06 13:40:45 · answer #3 · answered by maxiangelo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its great. People who can put things on paper like that amaze me. Keep writing.
2006-12-06 13:40:30 · answer #4 · answered by tam7733 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like
2006-12-06 13:42:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's sweet! Good job.
2006-12-06 13:37:23 · answer #6 · answered by ~Another Day~ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey that was an awsome poem. i'm sure that any girl crushin on someone would feel this way! :]
2006-12-06 13:38:19 · answer #7 · answered by birdy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty Good!!!
2006-12-06 13:41:18 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! You might be a poet and not know it !
2006-12-06 13:43:44 · answer #9 · answered by oatie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. guud job. :) i love love poems. haha. keep postin buddy. ur on a roll... :D srlsy..though. i like it.
2006-12-06 13:38:11 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋