im the girl you pushed away after the pain became too much~but im over it and moved on~with you. Why would i carry on?~you cant blame the past~but you can move on~what are you gonna do now that im gone?
xOxO
♥
2006-12-06 10:34:43 · 18 answers · asked by KatastropheGirl™ 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
although im not i guy i still luvv it
u should become a poet
2006-12-06 10:37:09 · answer #1 · answered by heythere! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it can use some tweaking and some rewording.
there's too many hard T's like can't and past, etc. it ruins the fluidity of the wording. just some tweaking, make it have a bit more of a beat to it, and you should be good. ^_^
2006-12-06 10:45:14 · answer #2 · answered by veritech78 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it sounds really good <3
2006-12-06 10:37:40 · answer #3 · answered by Bunnie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He probably left you for Phyllis Diller. Now's your chance to pursue your dream boat Don Rickles.
2006-12-06 11:49:58 · answer #4 · answered by robert m 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like dis **** dats what da men be doin for real
when they cheat on you and come back wantin you and you moved
(or you dump them)
2006-12-06 10:38:59 · answer #5 · answered by iesha g 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good! Tho I wouldn't to many of your lyrics or poems on the ,net....someone might steal it and say that they wrote it
2006-12-06 10:44:11 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
most likely by the time you finished writing that he was already at some girls house
2006-12-06 10:37:17 · answer #7 · answered by Adam T 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it alot, I relate to that! How did you do the heart thing? Email me!
2006-12-06 10:36:36 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
That's good. Make it a song!
2006-12-06 10:36:25 · answer #9 · answered by tia 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
That's very good! I like it a lot!
2006-12-06 10:37:08 · answer #10 · answered by PrettyEyes 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋