What do you think of my lyrics?
Song Title: It's you again
Last week, I saw you with her
You looked so happy,
I felt so more than sure
that it was over
with me and you
(Hook)
it happened so fast, what could I've done,
the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,
I don't want you anymore.
(Chorus)
Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again.
I was at the store on Friday afternoon,
I saw you there, thought it was to soon,
Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,
we got together too late
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
It’s not about how long it takes
It’s not about why we broke up
We just need to remember
The good times we had and we’ll
Be together.
If the shoe fits
We’ll never miss.
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you a…
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again
Again
Again
Again
It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…
Maybe Lovin' you still....
2006-12-06 09:32:29 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
oh my you have some great future ahead of you. That was fantastic!!! It was very moving and i understood it perfectly you are so going to be a great songwriter.
keep it up
2006-12-06 09:41:10 · answer #1 · answered by iloveDEREKJETER! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im not likely into that kinda track however the persons who're im particular like it. a number of your rhyme types are off yet in any different case sturdy (i don't advise the incredibly words your are rhyming with)
2016-12-13 04:06:53 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it....let me know when you're finished, i know some ppl whou could prolly lay some music out for it!!
2006-12-06 09:36:35 · answer #3 · answered by Sally Doll 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
looks good
2006-12-06 09:34:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
they're pretty good, a little confusing maybe
2006-12-06 09:37:46 · answer #5 · answered by Kasey Kahne Girl 9! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not exactly my style, but it's pretty good, it flows well.
2006-12-06 09:44:34 · answer #6 · answered by Cartman the emo ranger 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋