Please help me add on to this I'm wanna make it in to a song PLEASE READ And tell me what you think. Thanks!!

Question

Yesterday I drove down the street, the street where you told me “Love is being able to understand one another and that our love was meant to be” I could help but think of all our memories we made together the way you would sing to me just to see my smile the way you said your love for me would never change. As the time gone by I can finally say I’m ashamed to say I never did understand you. You made it seem like we could make it threw any storm, but we drifted two states of minds, not being able combine. For years I tried to make things right I left all our errors aside I tried looking over my pride, because something was missing inside. I waited ever so patiently for you to come around. Your presence existed, but your heart was missing. No effort was made in your part never thought I’d be able to extract the drat you ever so carefully placed in my heart. You left me so empty in side or so that’s the way it felt.... (READ BELOW THERES MORE TOO IT)

I never could really find the right words to say I just couldn’t express my self in any other way. So I sat back for you quietly, patiently, willing to wait for you, but I think you failed to notice that in time I would be the only one who would of road threw any storm, but your perception of what you had, has been fogged by another

Answer 1

crazy - I can actually hear this being sung in my head as I read it. In my mind it goes like this:

Verse 1:
Yesterday I drove down the street, the street where you told me
“Love is being able to understand one another and that our love was meant to be”
I could help but think of all our memories we made together the way you would sing to me just to see my smile
the way you said your love for me would never change. As the time gone by

Bridge:
I can finally say I’m ashamed to say I never did understand you. You made it seem like we could make it threw any storm, but we drifted two states of minds, not being able combine. For years I tried to make things right I left all our errors aside I tried looking over my pride, because something was missing inside.
-----need to mix a lead into a chorus here-----

Verse 2:
I waited ever so patiently for you to come around.
Your presence existed, but your heart was missing.
No effort was made in your part never thought
I’d be able to extract the drat you ever so carefully placed in my heart.
You left me so empty in side or so that’s the way it felt
I never could really find the right words to say I just couldn’t express my self in any other way. So I sat back for you quietly, patiently, willing to wait for you, but I think you failed to notice that in time I would be the only one who would of road threw any storm, but your perception of what you had, has been fogged by another

Bridge:
I can finally say I’m ashamed to say I never did understand you. You made it seem like we could make it threw any storm, but we drifted two states of minds, not being able combine. For years I tried to make things right I left all our errors aside I tried looking over my pride, because something was missing inside.
-----need to mix a lead into a chorus here-----

Answer 2

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Answer 3

I like it...can't add any right now...i'm not feeling good!!! But, as soon as you get some music to it let me,,,i know some ppl who might could lay out the music for you

Answer 4

That sounds great. You sing, I'll play the guitar.