what's a good title for this metaphor poem that i wrote?
Christmas is a summer day
In the middle of winter.
Its warmth spreads throughout families,
And throughout the hearts of loved ones it does enter.
The cheerful spirit of Christmas
Is a little elf dancing in my heart.
Seeing all the relatives I have missed,
The memories will never part.
P.S. Could you also maybe correct my poem?
2006-12-05 23:29:00 · 4 answers · asked by Sarah S 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
is "Time for Love" a good title? could i use that?
2006-12-05 23:54:58 · update #1
I meant "Time for Love and Family"
2006-12-05 23:56:28 · update #2
do i capitalize "for"?
2006-12-05 23:57:09 · update #3
The Cheerful Spirit of Christmas
btw, great poem!
2006-12-05 23:36:25 · answer #1 · answered by ▒♥▒♥▒♥▒♥▒™ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Meaning of Christmas is a suggested title. Don't put a period of the last sentence of the first stanza, "enter", also do not put a period after "part" in the second stanza. Your poem is WONDERFUL!, how lovely.
2006-12-06 07:37:40 · answer #2 · answered by Nancy S 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well, your poem could be named " cheerful Christmas spirit and unforgettable memories"
2006-12-06 09:02:22 · answer #3 · answered by osi_x14 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
way to become cheerful : hope this will be appropriate for ur such a nice poem.
2006-12-06 08:27:21 · answer #4 · answered by gurpreet 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋