I'm just now realizing the things that I should do
And though I just dont see a future without you
I find myself lost for words
So I dont know what to say
So I'm just gonna lie here a moment
And think of a way
To give you the tears
That my eyes can no longer bare
Cause everytime I take a step forward
You take two back
And you got me thinking that perhaps
The things I dream about reality
To you are just ideas of fantasy
I dont want to cry no more
So I think its time to start the process of
Shutting the door
And locking you out
2006-12-05 23:09:03 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender
Just to let everyone know who has made comments about the writer. I did write it. Thanks for the compliments.
2006-12-05 23:34:43 · update #1
Luggerbug ... usually I would really appreciate gramatical corrections but where is your answer to the question asked? shame
2006-12-06 01:25:09 · update #2
If you wrote this you did a marvelous job, but if you recieved it, your partner no longer wants you in her (or his) life.'Sharing a person's dreams or understanding them is all part of a great relationship. It goes hand in hand with honesty and caring, understanding, commitment and, oh yes, LOVE!
If you did recieve this poem (or someone you know did) it's time to move on and ponder the jewel of a person you just lost.
I say that last part because it takes a lot of inner beauty to write that sort poem.
2006-12-05 23:32:41 · answer #1 · answered by dragon 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Most of the time it's among 14 and 18 weeks...my document goes to do it at 18 weeks...i nonetheless am within the wait to discover out the gender however im certain i can be shock rationale we're backward and forward at all times whether or not this can be a boy or a lady
2016-09-03 11:35:44 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't know if this is about you or not but this is what I would think.....
It means that although the person can't imagine life without you, they are going to have to leave and not be with u anymore, because you are causing them heartache because you are not into the relationship like they are, you are not really present, you are not heading in the same direction they are. They want committment and want you around, and you are shrinking back and saying no.
you are not giving enough interest, and this person doesn't want to be hurt.
It's a cool piece of writing, very expressive
2006-12-05 23:13:15 · answer #3 · answered by Ambience 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I think it means that someone is love, but the other person isn't returning that love. It's about heart ache and finally facing the fact that things are hopeless with that person. Time to shut the door of the heart and move on. Very well written, and though it's sad, a very good poem.
2006-12-05 23:15:17 · answer #4 · answered by sparkie 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
OK ! This is a nice poem.
I would like you to tidy up the grammar a little.
Line 2 - And 'though I just don't see...('though' is a contraction of 'although'. So apostrophe required.
Line 4 - don't
Line 5 - going to
Line 8 - bear
Line 9 - 'Cause every time ....
Line 11 - You have me thinking ....
Line 14 - don't
Line 15 - it's ("its" is a personal pronoun)
2006-12-06 00:19:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
I think it means that the author is accepting that a relationship is over after a long line of dissapointments. I think the author is writting to someone to tell them goodbye.
2006-12-05 23:23:16 · answer #6 · answered by rosey 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
She is not happy with the relationship and although she doesn't see a future without you , she wants to get you out of her life.
In short, she wants to break up with you.
It is a very good break up letter!!!!
Good luck!!!
2006-12-05 23:20:36 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Beautiful. Emotionally intelligent, too, in my humble opinion
2006-12-06 00:04:20 · answer #8 · answered by st.uncumber 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
(beautiful) very poetic, and gives the point that you are tired of the hurt and indecison in the persons life.. WOW
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2006-12-06 00:08:51 · answer #9 · answered by southernboy 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
some one getting over an old boyfriend or gurlfriend???
2006-12-05 23:11:14 · answer #10 · answered by lucifer 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋