how can i make this more clear?

Question

First, more students should go to community college instead of four year universities for their first two years of college, since community colleges are cheaper. Going to community college for the first two years, is way cheaper than going two years at a university. While attending a community college your first two years, you can be saving your money so that you can put it towards the second two years of your education at a university. People that follow the Community College path, are bound to succeed in their career, because the people who barely afford to pay the university tuitions get more stressed out and end up giving up their education than the ones that can work less and pay less at a Junior College. That’s why more students should, go to Community College.

Answer 1

You just did!

Answer 2

In my personal experience, my classes at a community college were not only a third of the cost, but the student to teacher ratio was also smaller, so if you needed extra help with something from the teacher, you could get it. Professors at the university that i went to required you to contact them during their set office hours if you needed extra help. So if you had a class during that time, you couldnt get help. I took the same math class at a university and a community college, and at the university i failed the course, but at the CC i had an overall grade of 98% A and got the second highest grade on the final, cuz I was able to go to the teacher after class when I just wasnt understanding a certain thing and she sat down with me right then and explained it further for 15-30 mins, however long needed. You might want to include something like that in your argument.

Answer 3

Thank you! I've been trying to say this for ages. Also, community colleges are a good place to take some of the general classes that are required in every degree, such as the Philosophy 101, or basic university-level math. Then they have more time to decide what they want to do and get exposed to different subjects so they can find out what they're good at. Much cheaper than going to a university and changing majors three times!