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English III-AP-5th
11-6-06
Why We Should Use Typewriters Instead of Computers
Has your computer ever given you problems? Perhaps it stole your paper you just saved, or it displayed “Fatal System Error” and proceeded into a fit of chronic shutdowns, or even got a virus and refused to cooperate. Well, if this has ever happened you should know why the typewriter has to be a much better machine.
First off, with a typewriter, there is nothing to turn on, no waiting for anything to load, all you have to do is load some paper in and you are ready to start













so what do you think i should do next

Answer 1

Be careful with what the first guy said. If you're in high school, don't worry about it. But anything after that, they do have computer programs to see if it has been forged and you'll be kicked out.

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Notice how the first two sentences are introduction, the next one lists what I'm going to talk about, and the last sentence leads into the first body paragraph. Now go nuts on your essay.

Answer 2

Thinking means waste of time...If you wish and think that typewriter is better then pc then you shouldn't wait for that just make ur notes on typewriter as there are many problems with the typewriter like that if you somehow lost ur papers or got misplaced, then u need to again make that and all time is wasted and if havin emergency then you will lost ur mind balance and if u use pc, a good pc with Linux then u will never face virus. error or any sudden shutdown problem and can change ur documents whenever u like...theink about the disadvantages on both side...




If typewriter was far better the PC then no one ever think of making a PC...
Change happen as per requirements and need to replace previous errors.....

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Also, the constant loading of web-pages and instaling cartriges. All in all, the typewriter is more convenient and efficient then the modern-day computer. True, the computer is good in some ways, but a typewriter doesn't guzzle energy, or burn your eyes out with bright LEDs.

Answer 5

Get rid of your typewriter and get a better computer that doesn't crash...Saves paper. Easy to correct. No correction ribbon. Spell check. Change font styles easy. Ability to email. Etc.etc.

Yep, I'd change my whole paper if I were you.

Answer 6

Change it round a bit. For example how the computer steal the paper? it doesn' make sense. Put this instead: perhaps you forgot to save work while typing.

Answer 7

Your first paragraph is interesting but when doing essay you have to present unbiased info on first paragraph.state facts about computers and typewriters. then on the second it is the time to present pros an cons on both equipment. then, you have to weigh both info and make a conclusion. Thank you...

Answer 8

You are trying to make a very tough argument. If you truly believed the type writer was better it would flow for you. Is this a topic your teacher picked?

Answer 9

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