this is one of my sentence from my essay.... N' i dunno does this make sense so plz revise it an tell me where i can improve on... N' also i dunno did i use nevertheless in the right way....
2006-12-05 15:57:06 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Try this sentence with out knowing the contextual sentences around it it is the best I can do. "The health of both his patients and his family members are of the utmost importance to him."
First of all those of you who said nevertheless is contradictory you are correct.
Secondly "a lot" refers to a piece of land or a group of items to be bid on at auction. As my Senior year high school English teacher used to say if you have "a lot of friends" you own a Quaker cemetery (for those of you who don't get the reference you need to brush up on your American history).
2006-12-05 16:33:41 · answer #1 · answered by Silver phoenix 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, that is incorrect grammar.
I think this is what you're trying to say:
"He cares a lot for the health of his patients. Nevertheless, he also cares deeply for each of his own family members."
The grammar is now correct, but content-wise, it still doesn't completely make sense. "Nevertheless" is supposed to express contradiction, and the fact that this doctor cares for his family does not contradict the fact that he cares for his patients as well.
This would make more sense:
"The doctor cares for his family a great deal. In addition, he also shows great care and concern for all of his patients."
2006-12-05 23:57:48 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
He careS alot for his patient's health, BUT nevertheless he ALSO careS for the each family member
2006-12-06 00:01:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it does not make sense. I think you are trying to say that he cares for both the patient and his family. In which case it would be simpler (and more correct) to write:
He cares very much for his patients health, as well as for the care of each family member"
Good luck
2006-12-06 00:00:42 · answer #4 · answered by freshbliss 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He cares a lot for his patient's health and that of each family member..
2006-12-06 00:10:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
He cared a lot for his patient's health as well as showing concern for each family member. You may want to get someone to proofread your entire essay before turning it in.
2006-12-06 00:00:55 · answer #6 · answered by ladyw900ldriver 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That doesn't make any sense at all.
A more appropriate sentence would read:
"He cares a lot about his patient's health, as well as each of his family members"
If that's what you're even trying to say.
2006-12-05 23:59:54 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
" He careS alot for his patient's health, BUT nevertheless he ALSO careS for the each family member"?
2006-12-05 23:59:01 · answer #8 · answered by karma_goddess84 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He cares for his patients` health, as well as their family members.
- sounds better?
2006-12-06 00:10:26 · answer #9 · answered by mymood_is_realrude 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no! no! no!
do this:
He cares a lot for his patient's health; nevertheless, he cares for each family member."
or:
He cares a lot for his patient's health as he cares for each of his family member's health.
2006-12-06 00:03:11 · answer #10 · answered by Louiegirl_Chicago 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋