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because of such surroundings, his sort of character still remained after he entered high-school. As he refused to wander alone, there are bad rumors about him. He was frighten to go around alone. He was nervous to go around alone among the crowd and glittering street. So he couldn't image going around without his mother, and he felt hear about teasing toward him.

Answer 1

Because of the surroundings he was in, his character traits remainined after he entered high school. Since he refused to wander alone, there were bad rumors about him. He was frightened to go around by himself. He was nervous to be alone in a crowd or even on the street. So he couldn't image going somewhere without his mother and he felt like he could hear them teasing him about it.

Answer 2

Even in high school, probably because of its environment, his behavior did not change. Since he refused to go anywhere all by himself, people spread rumors. Standing alone in a crowd or going out at night would frighten or upset him. He couldn´t even picture himself going places without his mother. In addition, wherever he went, he always felt people stared and made fun of him.