What do you think of my lyrics?
Song Title: It's you again
Last week, I saw you with her
You looked so happy,
I felt so more than sure
that it was over
with me and you
(Hook)
it happened so fast, what could I've done,
the chance I had was none, then you showed up at my door,
I don't want you anymore.
(Chorus)
Doorbell rings, when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again.
I was at the store on Friday afternoon,
I saw you there, thought it was to soon,
Talking 'bout the mistakes we made,
we got together too late
(Chorus)
(Bridge)
It’s not about how long it takes
It’s not about why we broke up
We just need to remember
The good times we had and we’ll
Be together.
If the shoe fits
We’ll never miss.
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you a…
Doorbell rings when I answer it, you are there
Your at the door again.
Wind chimes blowing, outside it's snowing,
Candy and flowers in your hand.
It's you again
Again
Again
Again
It’s you again. Oh ooh oh…
Maybe Lovin' you still....
2006-12-04 16:20:25 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
it's pop..
2006-12-04 16:23:42 · update #1
It's very pretty. I'd love to hear what it sounds like set to music.
2006-12-04 16:22:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
one million) How previous are you? 20 2) Do you like listening to track? needless to say!! 3) What form/s of track do you pay attention to maximum? R&B, Pop, 90s dance 4) Do you play any particular musical device? i'm able to play piano yet i'm in simple terms a newbie 5) What do you think of of emos and punks? Uh, they are ok?
2016-12-13 03:04:18 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im not really into that kinda music but the people who are im sure love it.
some of your rhyme patterns are off but otherwise good
(I don't mean the actual words your are rhyming with)
2006-12-04 16:25:21 · answer #3 · answered by uofmeuchre 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm going to be honest with you. It's a little immature. Not to sound mean or anything but a 3rd grader could write this song.
2006-12-04 16:28:34 · answer #4 · answered by music_guru72023 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd probably change it if it was played on the Radio, I'm not into Country music.
2006-12-04 16:23:13 · answer #5 · answered by Robert01Hutton 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds great, too much like my life though
2006-12-04 16:30:51 · answer #6 · answered by mj216 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats awesome, its really good
2006-12-04 16:21:36 · answer #7 · answered by catfight1980 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
one word: CHEESE...been there, done that...stop writing recycled lyrics
2006-12-04 16:25:49 · answer #8 · answered by nico_soul1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
these lyrics are so cool i hope so will it be its tune.can you please send me its recording on mail
2006-12-04 16:26:55 · answer #9 · answered by varun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋