need help with a thesis?

Question

want to talk about the CONTROVERSY OF REGGAETON. like for example "reggaeton has caused some controversy, albeit much less, due to a few of the songs explicit lyrics and alleged exploitation of women" like in their videos, dancing (PERREO), effects on culture(gang, fashion, morals, women, drugs, SEX)
please help me i really need your help =)

thank you in advance

Answer 1

I assume that you are writing a paragraph or series of paragraphs following a thesis statement:

Reggaeton music is controversial due to the explicit language in its lyrics, the subject matter in reggaeton music videos, and its effects on society.

First, the lyrics in reggaeton music cause controversy because ......(GIVE REAL EXAMPLES of songs and subjects here, but do not use the explicit language itself. State why it is controversial...)

Second, the subject matter in the videos are controversial. In many videos, women are exploited by their placement in the video, how they participate, and how they are attired. (GIVE EXAMPLES, again, and state why they are controversial (offends women, offends religious conservatives, etc.).

Third, reggaeton music has negative effects on society. It exposes teenagers and younger adults to (GIVE EXAMPLES). This causes controversy because (state why...).

Answer 2

In order to write any thesis you need a clearer picture of what it is specifically you're trying to say.
So do you believe the controversy is justified? not justified?
I wasn't sure by what you wrote but you'd certaintly need to take a stand one way or the other. I'd like to help, but could you resubmit your thoughts a little more clearly?
thanks