Within this image of you
just placing in the deepest side of my mind
I have to raise and yell
how much freedom I just have reach.
Within your arms that embrace me
every now and then... and almost most of the time
I feel so good to share ur warmess
and to have a kindly shoulder to rest my soul on.
Within the peace of your world
in which i just have been living
i am able to breath the calm
and to eat the deepest sincerity.
Within your powerful and understanding love
my life has now, true and solid values
your ideals are mine also
and I shall fight all the wars at your side.
Within those kisses from your lips
so kind... and so sincere
I must smile and thanks God
for sharing with me his greatest creation.
Within your wisdom and convictions
I must see from now on the world
I will share your knowledge with the rest
and make this world a better place.
2006-12-04 14:58:15 · 7 answers · asked by Finy 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Within your love, your unique love
within your soul, your perfect soul
within your arms, your protective arms
within your heart, your understanding heart
I shall love you and respect you
from here to the eternity.
2006-12-04 15:16:00 · update #1
I looked on the net and didn´t find anything about that S. Odekerk, the boon poem is from another writer and is about something else, that is nothing to do with mine.
2006-12-04 15:27:36 · update #2
beautiful like u
2006-12-04 16:04:39 · answer #1 · answered by hex3h_4ystreetraze 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That poem is very similar to the one written by S. Odekerk several years ago.
Boon
Within this picture of you
just putting in the deepest part of my head
I need to scream
how much to escape confinement I have left.
With your bearhug that cuddles me
every so often... and the majority of the time
I feel happy sharing your body heat
and to have a friend that I can relieve my problems.
Within the part of your planet
where I have been residing
i am able to smell the ease
and to digest the furthest sincerity.
Within your strong and considerate feelings
my destiny has now, strong values
we are alike in many ways
and I'll punch the battles in front and behind you.
Within love taps from your mouth,
so sweet and juicy
I smirk and thank Buddah
for sharing with me his good disciple.
Within your intellect and convictions
I must look now on the earth
I will share your thoughts with everyone else
and make this planet grand.
2006-12-04 23:20:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Its fine but I do think you can improve Im really sorry but I got a little sleepy and kinda fell asleep no affense but you might need to change it a little to get people interested I liked a bit though and I love how you were using how to keep the world a better place and how it is peace. I saw this video and it said 'Caution: D onot watch this movie in the car you might fall asleep. IM NOT TALKING ABOUT YOURS.
2006-12-04 23:04:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
i would love to tell you that i did make copy and paste and sent it 2my fiance i am so much in love with her ohhhhh and dont worry i made the his HER lolz thank u u have so warm soul .
2006-12-04 23:12:15 · answer #4 · answered by mohame 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yea i like that poem alot, u should try posting it on lovepoetry.com
2006-12-04 23:02:15 · answer #5 · answered by Sweetheart88 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes its beautiful.
2006-12-04 23:06:42 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very pretty!
2006-12-04 23:02:08 · answer #7 · answered by kayboff 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋