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I made this poem up because I had to do it for health class its about drinking and driving.

The guy drank the beer
and his wife started to fear.
He drove to the store while his
wife was waiting indoors. On
his way home he ran over a
nome. As the car started turning
is face started burning. When
the car stopped he was just lying there.
with his face down His wife
started to cry when she found
out he died thats what happens
when you drink and drive.

2006-12-04 12:59:22 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships Friends

9 answers

you did a good job. and you made a good point about drinking and driving. you should be proud of yourself.

2006-12-04 13:06:04 · answer #1 · answered by atiana 6 · 0 0

It definitely puts the message out there that drinking and driving is a huge mistake. That's all that matters! Good work!

2006-12-04 21:13:57 · answer #2 · answered by lyona22 2 · 0 0

its kinda sad for the wife but atv the same time the guy chose to drink and drive so depending on what perspective you put it in

2006-12-04 21:09:44 · answer #3 · answered by Lizzy<33 2 · 0 0

yes a bit sad i guess........
like others said a bit sudden -----if you were to ask me to repeat it i would say
a man was driving
his wife was infear
and his face was down
she started crying
and thats what happens when you drink and drive

2006-12-04 21:17:05 · answer #4 · answered by bRoWn eYeD BuTTeRfLy®210~TX 6 · 0 0

Sort of lame, not sad. I don't think I care for your use of verse.

2006-12-04 21:02:59 · answer #5 · answered by relaxed 4 · 0 0

Not that sad. I think it's lame. Sorry.

2006-12-04 21:01:59 · answer #6 · answered by -N- 2 · 0 0

THAT IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I HAVE EVER HEARD AND YES IT IS SAD
GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!

2006-12-04 21:27:30 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

i like it but it was really sad and sudden

2006-12-04 21:09:18 · answer #8 · answered by ausome_chic232 1 · 0 0

VERY SAD!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT BUT IT WAS SO (SAD)

2006-12-04 21:36:24 · answer #9 · answered by *á?¦eMo gAlá?¦* 1 · 0 0

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