ok this is my opening sentce and i want u to check and fix if theres any problem thanks
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humens devote fences around them, for their shield. some do borrow there arm to protect there beloved once
2006-12-04 12:31:43 · 4 answers · asked by huichongkim61 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
You need to try and make your sentence comprehensible, I couldn't even figure out what you were trying to say.
2006-12-04 12:37:13 · answer #1 · answered by Lachelle 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Humans put fences around them for their shield. Some borrow weapons to protect their beloved ones.
I don't know what you are talking about.
Very confusing.
2006-12-04 20:38:50 · answer #2 · answered by Jill 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need lots of help
2006-12-04 20:38:34 · answer #3 · answered by queensassey 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your okay dude
2006-12-04 20:39:01 · answer #4 · answered by BonBon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋