Keep in mind, I'm only eleven
Rain is falling
Rain falls softly
In a garden of an angel
Flowers drink the quenching rain
One rose stands from the rest
The pitter-patter sound of the
Light rain pleases her
She dances in the rain
2006-12-04 04:18:11 · 12 answers · asked by princessofthethrown 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
This was my 4th poem out of nine going on ten. I'm in the gifted class, and my teacher is making me write a tiny ten poem book. I'm quite pround of myself. e-mail me some tips at princessofthethrown@yahoo.com ; }
2006-12-04 04:32:49 · update #1
Foil hat dude. What was that suposed to mean!?
2006-12-04 04:55:01 · update #2
11....pretty good! keep up the good work!
2006-12-04 04:22:29 · answer #1 · answered by Robert B 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really great! Keep writing poems and try the short story on for "size", too. You have the imagination for it. It also pays better.;-)
2006-12-04 12:56:54 · answer #2 · answered by hillbilly 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice !!
shows your alive imagination!
keep up the good job ,you'll be a great poet in a few years!
2006-12-04 12:23:08 · answer #3 · answered by Mysterious 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a very good and well written poem.
2006-12-04 12:25:29 · answer #4 · answered by Mr. Knowledgeable VI 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a good cure for diarrhea
2006-12-04 12:33:16 · answer #5 · answered by New Foil Hat1134 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like
2006-12-04 12:21:01 · answer #6 · answered by Ken and Wendy M 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really good. Keep it up!
2006-12-04 12:33:26 · answer #7 · answered by dyingatwork 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes l do.
2006-12-04 13:47:42 · answer #8 · answered by Judas Rabbi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, it has emotion in it that was good.:-)
2006-12-04 12:30:55 · answer #9 · answered by Precious S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is pretty good
2006-12-04 13:56:10 · answer #10 · answered by jamieleerobertsmith 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋