I wanna be a singer when I grow up i'm 14, and I just made up this verse from a song after a girl broke my heart tell me if itz good or not please only post truthful answers.
If we were ment to be then why did you hurt me
We were so in love
and now you’ve desert me
simple lies made me cry
I felt so bad so I asked why
a love so strong had to die
but did you really love me?
2006-12-02 16:05:44 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
~its actually pretty good Sweetheart! the 3rd line could use a little work, but other than that, you've got a REALLY good start. :)
2006-12-02 17:22:26 · answer #1 · answered by Kitten2 6 · 8⤊ 0⤋
Forget what everyone else says. Very nice.
2006-12-02 16:10:45 · answer #2 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Ugh. I hate love song boy singers they make it sound so fake..
2006-12-02 16:08:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 4⤋
You have to experience love before you can write about it.
2006-12-02 16:08:41 · answer #4 · answered by Carol R 7 · 0⤊ 4⤋
good song f|_|ck all those @$$hole you say your song sucks
2006-12-02 16:12:07 · answer #5 · answered by Mark 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
dude, that song is gay...
2006-12-02 16:07:37 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 5⤋