You can remove the unnecessary adverb. "The essence to write well is to write TIGHT, eliminate all words that are useless," my uncle said. Use personification to intensify the reader's feeling. For example: the sky is blue. Above my head, birds dance with the wind through the sky. Wind cannot dance but i want to express the bird's freedom. Dancing makes us feel alive! ^_^
2006-12-02 15:10:54
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answered by Anonymous
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Swiftly, the girl played the piano.
You can always place the complement on the beginning. For example, you have a S-IV-C patterned sentence, you can make it C-S-IV. Just don't forget the comma.
You can also make use of methapors and similes and other figures of speech to make our sentence more interesting.
2006-12-02 15:09:15
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answered by eris 2
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Just to tell you, this is a Literature question. Okay, first use as many adjectives as possible. For your example, "She played the piano swiftly" i would do something like "With her nimble fingers, she played the piano swiftly, creating a beautiful melody." Something like that. It depends on the story.
2006-12-02 15:17:21
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answered by chelseaaa. 3
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2016-11-23 13:42:22
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answered by wilcoxen 4
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The only thing I can think of to help you is to double check the subject-verb agreement once you've re-worded the sentence. Also, make sure that you don't change the meaning.
2006-12-02 15:02:37
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answered by Brandon 2
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You can also use metaphorical language: "Her fingers raced up and down the keyboard like a restless ferret in a cage."
2006-12-02 15:05:55
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answered by ? 4
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Shakespeare style
Swiftly, thou played the piano.
2006-12-02 15:01:33
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answered by JaxJagsFan 7
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