its for my history paper....if not, how can i improve this sentence....been fiddling with it for a while now
The course of today’s war in the Mideast against terrorism is startlingly similar to the course of war in Vietnam, despite the fact that Vietnam purportedly served as a lesson in foreign affairs.
2006-12-02 12:14:11 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
One minor suggestion - what about "against terrorism in the Middle East?" The way it's worded sounds as the it could be the Mideast that's against terrorism.
2006-12-02 12:19:52 · answer #1 · answered by Adriana 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
The course of today's war against terrorism in the Middle East is startlingly similar to that of the Vietnam war. This is despite the fact that the Vietnam War purportedly served as a lesson in foreign affairs.
2006-12-02 20:25:07 · answer #2 · answered by boogeywoogy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The course of today’s war in the Middle East, which is allegedly against terrorism, is strikingly similar to the course of war which took place in Vietnam, despite the fact that Vietnam purportedly served as a lesson in foreign affairs.
2006-12-02 20:23:50 · answer #3 · answered by MALicious 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
its Middle East
2006-12-02 20:16:23 · answer #4 · answered by epbr123 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ok
2006-12-02 20:17:35 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Very well!!
2006-12-02 20:25:01 · answer #6 · answered by shiny 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
try www.dictionary.com or whitesmoke.com
2006-12-02 20:18:03 · answer #7 · answered by LisaGirl 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
You didn't learn from it.
2006-12-02 20:23:36 · answer #8 · answered by robert m 7 · 0⤊ 3⤋