the girl is so afraid.
i try to comfort her, but she runs away.
this little girl, so young, but so full of fears.
i want to hug her, to wipe away her tears.
to tell her itll be okay,
that tomorrow will be a better day.
but i cant, for she doesnt understand.
she thinks more pain comes with the touch of my hand.
this girl is my soul, afraid of every thing alive.
she cant be comforted, but for happiness she strives..
2006-12-02 09:20:06 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
this is like about my life lol. i dont like ppl getting close to me and touchinn me b/c im afaid i guess lol idk but its about how i am lol
2006-12-03 09:54:25 · update #1
I think this is a sad and beautiful poem. I want to hug the girl and give her happiness.
If you are in a troubled situation, I think writing is an excellent outlet for your feelings and helps you get through them.
Sometimes the only thing that would comfort me on a bad day whilst growing up was books, writing, and drawing and hope for a better future. If you need a listening ear, you can email me, ok?
2006-12-02 17:52:28 · answer #1 · answered by kewte_kewpie 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a touching poem, very poignant. Great job! ;)
2006-12-02 17:26:52 · answer #2 · answered by @~>--T--<~@ 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Nice poem.
2006-12-02 17:23:51 · answer #3 · answered by Dinasor76 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
very good. has meaning and i like your choice of words. sounds like a true poem that really happened to some one..
2006-12-02 17:26:34 · answer #4 · answered by StarShine G 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow,yes very much so. I think it is really deep and real.
2006-12-02 17:26:44 · answer #5 · answered by angel_baby_17 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I really liked it!. You got talent, hope to be able to read more.
2006-12-03 12:29:00 · answer #6 · answered by April M 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yes, I like it ok.
Thank you for sharing.
2006-12-02 17:22:25 · answer #7 · answered by elibw 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
THAT WAS AWSOME!! U SHOULD WRITE POEMS FOR A LIVIN
2006-12-02 17:24:16 · answer #8 · answered by TJ Jones 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋