Say what...........a poem?

Question

One fine October morning
in April, last July,
the moon fell on my window,
the rain shone in the sky.

The flowers sang quite sweetly.
The birds were in full bloom.
I dumped the neighbor’s garbage
inside our dining room.

My parents always praise me
for sneaking out of school.
They tell me not to study,
so I won’t be a fool.

My favorite food is spinach.
It makes my muscles small.
Each day I’m growing shorter—
soon I’ll be eight feet tall!

I’m saving up my money
to throw it all away.
I hope this poem annoys you,
so have a happy day.

This poem is not about me.

What do you think of it?

Answer 1

reminds me of

early one morning late last night
2 dead brother woke up to fight
back to back they faced each other
drew there swords and shot each other

a deaf policeman heard the noise
and came to kill the 2 dead boys

if you dont believe this lie is true
ask that blind mand she saw it too

Answer 2

A thumbs-up to you
10/10 for the GREAT WORK !!!

Answer 3

I loved this poem ! The way you have used opposite situation...its marvellous ! You are great with poems. Keep up the good work...

Answer 4

Another Thumbs up for you! You are a good poet how do you come up with these! Great job, i like the poem and i am not annoyed :)

Answer 5

its something opposite. lovely loved it. especially the third verse about parents saying dont study. gosh!! is there any parent saying like that. ufff..... not mine i hear STUDY almost all the time. lol.

Answer 6

Very creative...I like the twists and opposition. You have talent~Go You!

Answer 7

some one has read washigton irving's "one dark day " poem- nice parellel though

Answer 8

phew! really yours?? must tell you that I have becum a fan of yours bcoz of ur creativity

Answer 9

if you wrote it, then it is good. Continue writing, you sure have the talent.

Answer 10

nice