Help with a thesis statement?????????

Question

I have to create a thesis statement for my final project on multiple births(the different kinds, the different rates, and the difficulties with having multiples). While still perserving what is at the heart of my thesis, rewrite it so that it challenges and captures the interest of your readers. Then identify whether my thesis is a claim of fact, definition, value, cause, of policy. Then explain what that means, and list three to five sub-claims you will use to support your thesis.

Answer 1

Without knowing what your subject matter is, you could catch your readers interest right off the bat with a statement like this: Identical Twins, Delightful or Defective?

In the 16th century, identicals twins and multiple births were not commonplace, and with the 20th century in full swing, technology can lend to multiple births for any mother who is healthy and willing to go through fertility procedures. It was once thought that identical twins were a type of genetic defect in the blastocyst causing it to split into two genetically identical eggs....

How's that?