Tanka poem with five lines and 31 syllables!!HELP!!!
2006-11-30 10:40:27 · 4 answers · asked by playa123 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Not just 5 lines 31 syllables, they are broken down by syllables per line:
5
7
5
7
7
They focus on nature, so don't be foolish ans write about a sport or love. write about a river, or some process in nature like erosion turning mountains into sand. Don't repeat yourself, and don't use any adverbs liek "slowly" or "very".
If you wanted someone to write one FOR you, that probably isn't going to happen. Take a crack at it!
2006-11-30 10:46:22 · answer #1 · answered by LEMME ANSWER THAT! 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
mushy breeze cools me August's lethargy has long previous The Yankees in the sequence Affectionate silent rain All's impressive with the worldwide Nota Bene: As a Bronx community i will legitimately assert that the manhattan Yankees are a rigidity of nature.
2016-10-04 14:00:40 · answer #2 · answered by duchane 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The sweet summer breeze on my back, (8 sl.)
I feel the joy of vacation. (8 sl.)
It is soft, (3 sl.)
It is warm, (3 sl.)
I become free from the teachers reighn. (9 sl.)
8+8+3+3+9=31 syllables.
possible title: summer freedom
2006-11-30 14:39:21 · answer #3 · answered by mystery guy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
O palace maiden
the daughter of my subject,
Do you bring a wine holder?
If you hold it up,
Oh, hold it in your hands;
oh, hold it firmly,
ever firmly in your hands;
O you wind holding maiden.
2006-11-30 10:46:59 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋