Can someone help me with this Eassy (Need Thesis In 1st paragraph)?

Question

During the Elizabethan era there were three different types of venues, which included: the Inn-yards, Open Air Amphitheaters, and Playhouses. The Inn-yards was one of the original venues, but some of them were alter into Playhouses.The Amphitheaters were made for the summer months and when it was time for winter, they would move into the indoor playhouses.

I think something wrong with the wording too, please help me out.....Thank you

Answer 1

you need to finish the thesis off with a sentence about the playhouses and then a conclusion to the thesis/introduction to the rest of the story. But so far it looks decent. You're in the tell them what you're going to tell them and it looks like you are doing that.

Answer 2

To correct the wording: During the Elizabethan era, there were three different types of venues, including: The inn-yards, the open air amphitheaters and the playhouses. The inn-yards were the original venues, but some of them were altered into playhouses. The amphitheaters were made for the summer months, but when winter came, they would move into the indoor playhouses.