Do you like my poem? I just made it up!?

Question

This Journey

Take my hand,
I’ll take yours.
Let’s take the open road,
Drive wherever we feel like going.

And I’ll cry just cause I have the tears,
I’m tired of laughing let’s get serious for a bit.
I’ll miss home,
But I wouldn’t trade this journey for the world.

Take my hand and I’ll take yours,
Don’t tell me to stop,
Or to turn around,
I want this journey.

The signs aren’t there,
Let’s just take the journey.
I want to dance,
Because we have the chance.

Let’s go, let’s just drive.
I just want you to know,
I care.
So let’s go, hand in hand.

We’ll cry cause we have the tears,
We’ll dance because there’s music.
I want to write my own story,
On this wonderful journey of ours.

Sure, it’s spontaneous,
But sometimes what we need is unplanned.
I want to go,
So let’s just leave.

The road is ahead; let’s go on this journey.
I’ll miss home,
But I’ve had home all my life.
So let’s go!

Take my hand and I’ll take yours,
We’ll smile cause we’re out of tears,
We’ll take pictures to remember,
This life filled journey of ours.

Let’s begin, hand in hand,
I’ll show you the way,
As long as you show me.
Let’s live life just cause we can.

Answer 1

I love your poem it really spoke to me. And it made me smile. i would give it 4 and a half stars.

Answer 2

Poetry is an individual expression and takes time to develop into the literary sucess it has gained worldwide. Just making up poetry is not respecting the talent and committment that comes along with becoming a poet. Take more time on your writing, do not rush a poem or your life.

Answer 3

Wow I loved that poem! It had so much meaning and it made me feel a lot better! And also calmer! You are a gifted poet; great work!

Answer 4

I love it. It's so good.