Like my poem? Just made it up now.......?

Question

Unsure and Insecure

I am unsure,
Insecure.

You tell me one thing,
Your voice says another.

My heart is pulled,
In too many ways.

Decisions confront me,
And you are no help.

It seems you want me to do nothing,
To stay here with you forever.

But I have decisions to make,
I want to go places in this life.

You just make me more unsure,
More insecure.

Sometimes all we need,
Is an opinion to make us sure.

I am unsure, insecure,
I don't know what to do.

Not even if you believe in me do I know,
So I remain insecure and unsure.

All tangled inside,
Can't make up my mind.

I will stay,
Unsure.

Answer 1

Miss Darcy,

Your poem sounds like one that a teenager would write. Trying to spread your wings and approach life, but almost frightened at the thought or action.

You have a great start. Continue, compile, publish.
Good luck to you!

Answer 2

Does this poem express how you're feeling? You must really be facing a difficult decision. Your poem makes a lot of sense. If you want to become a poet, go for it, you will most definitely grow. You need to spice up your poem a bit...it's kind of plain...make it a bit more mysterious...Good Luck!

Answer 3

its really good. i love writing poetry, mostly sad ones, i dont find im depressed but everytime i write one my teacher asks me aboutit. i wrote one called heartbroken and its really good but my teacher kept asking me who the boy was. wt are you insecure about? add on to the poem, u dont have to be specific, but give more details, more feelings, imagery

Answer 4

I like the opening and closing- it seems complete. I get the picture and it doesn't cute-sy rhyme... I like it.

Answer 5

gotta love teenage aignst

Answer 6

Kind of depressing, but if you're into that, it's pretty cool.