does anyone know any good poems that they wanna write on here?

Question

ok i have been writeing poems forever but i wanted to here how others write their poems. dont worry im not gonna go write them and take credit for them, but i would like to see them! so if you like poetry can you please show me one of your poems!!?

Answer 1

Rising from my slumber
From dreams that seem so real
You look at me with wonder
And ask me how I feel

Thoughtfully I choose my words
My confidence is weak
I see a tear fall from your eye
As you hear the words I speak

"Im feeling pessimistic, impatient and distressed
A little bit unruly and under great duress,
Vulnerable and violent, unstable and severe
Uncertain and uneasy, upset and quite unclear,
Impulsive, indecisive, indifferent and restrained
Utterley incapable of dealing with my pain,
Perniciously despondent, despicably inept
Illusional and furious
Emotionally unkempt
Skpetical and paralyzed
Uncivilized and numb
Immoral, introverted, hysterical and dumb."

So now you know the way I feel
And why I wear this mask
And just like every other day
You're sorry that you asked.

ANON.

(it want me who wrote this, i found it on a website and thought that it was excellent!! :) )

Answer 2

WHEN

When you're on the highest dosage
and it isn't half enough
When your nights are torn and twisted with the pain.
When the sleep you get is really rather futile
For it only brings the nightmares once again.

When you need someone to talk to
but your friends have had their fill.
When the doctor knows the problem
but has naught to cure the ill.
When your faith lies dead and broken
and all others seem as frail,

When a day of aching struggle
wins another just the same,
When crying does no good
and you're just too tired to scream
When hope is never present and pleasure rarely seen

When the happiness of others
gives the painful contrast one more time.
When the hollowness inside is sounding like a drum.

When love and laughter have finally fled.

Then, just then,

You'll be close to the place where I dwell
It's a place you might call hell.

My own work, with apologies to Rudyard Kipling.
2001

Answer 3

Love
Exciting and new...
Come aboard...
We're expecting you...
The love boat
Soon will be making another run
The love boat
Promises something for everyone
Set a course for adventure, your mind on a new romance
Then love
Won't hurt anymore
It's an open smile
On a friendly shore
It's love...
Welcome aboard, it's love.

(*sniff sniff*) Sorry, that one still chokes me up. It's a masterpiece.

Answer 4

Sorry you might steal them.