Ok, for this one, I was just playing around, okay? But I still want to know what people think...?

Question

I trust you,
a lie.
a red rose,
good bye.

a world,
full of lies.
should I live,
or should I die.

Okay, remember, I am playing around. But, this poem still has some meanings hidden in it, hope you don't overlook it.

Answer 1

it can mean so many things, depending on how you look at it. i like poems like this, because depending on who reads it and how they comprehend it, it can be significant in a million ways. but to just be playing around and write this, i love it.

Answer 2

I like your style Roxy. Keep communicating your feelings with poetry. And don't forget to date your work. You'll look back a year later and see the changes you've gone through. It's almost like a journal.

This one reminds me of Hamlet's "to be or not to be" Young people are always so dramatic about suicide when life disappoints them. You know, a permanent solution for a temporary problem. You have talent though and it's very therapeutic.

Answer 3

I got goosebumps. It's very simple, yet complex at the same time. Nice job!

Answer 4

nice poem

Answer 5

Sounds very sad, perhaps too realistic!