what would you do, if you knew, that i loved you?
What would you have done, if you found out, why i was around and about? I loved you, yes it's true. How would it be if you knew about me?
2006-11-28 06:02:16 · 5 answers · asked by Youngling 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i wrote this when i was about 10 or 11, btw
2006-11-28 06:06:46 · update #1
Awesome poem!
Amazing!! lol...
u were 10 or 11? that's so amazing!
2006-11-28 06:42:59 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
let me correct it for u.....
what would u have done,if u knew I had feelings 4 u?
what would u have done,if u found out,why I was around and about?
I love u YES its true
But what would u have done If u knew?
but ifu wrote it in the age of 10
then not bad honey!
2006-11-28 15:22:29 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
very good, especially for a 10-11 yr old.
Good job!
2006-11-28 14:12:29 · answer #3 · answered by Sir James the Dark 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
good for a 10yr old
2006-11-28 14:13:22 · answer #4 · answered by SHE HATE ME 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your a poet but you don't know it but you big **** show it.
2006-11-28 14:18:10 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋