I love You,
Not only for whar you are,
But for what I am when I am with you.
I Love You,
Not only for what you have made for yourself,
But for what you are making of me .
I Love You
For putting your hand into my heaped-up heart,
And passing over all the follish wear things,
That you can't help dimly seeing there,
And drawing out into the light,
All the beautiful belongings,
That no one else had looked,
Quite far enough to find.
You have done it, Without a touch,
Without a word, Without a sign
You have done it, by being yourself,
Perhaps that is what, being a "Friend" means...
2006-11-28 04:44:24 · 15 answers · asked by ||| Romeo Boy ||| 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
So good I gave you a thumbs up on your question. Seriously, it is very nice. I really enjoyed it. You got a gift. Give it a 10
2006-11-28 04:46:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
3
2006-11-28 12:54:34 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Maybe a 7...
I didn't care for the first half, but from "And drawing out the light" to the end was very good.
Nice job.
2006-11-28 12:50:27 · answer #3 · answered by Lezalicious 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Definitely gets a 9 in my book!
2006-11-28 12:47:20 · answer #4 · answered by Shining Ray of Light 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Get a life
2006-11-28 12:54:17 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice one....perhaps 11/10.....
2006-11-29 08:50:02 · answer #6 · answered by malani_rsmann 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great and sweet poem.
I'll rate you 10/10
Thanks for a good poem:)
2006-11-28 16:39:39 · answer #7 · answered by Dharshi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love this poem havent hear it in a long time
2006-11-28 12:46:36 · answer #8 · answered by Beth B 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I give it an 8
You lose points for bad grammer and spelling
2006-11-28 12:47:21 · answer #9 · answered by mimi22 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
-1
2006-11-28 12:46:21 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋