is this right?

Question

i need to write letter in the company where im working now and it goes like this...

To whom it may concern;

I, Tom Beganda working as waiter assigned in room service is requesting to your good office to provide my vacation money. I am now working for 2 years and 8 months since the last time I had my vacation.

Your necessary action with this matter is highly appreciated.

Please make some correction with this letter if you think its not good.The money i am talking about is that my company should pay me because i did not avail my vacation this year.

Answer 1

Jane Doe
Human Resources/Payroll

Re: Unpaid Vacation Time

My name is Tom Beganda, I work in room service as a waiter. I respectcully request that you review my records, and provide me with my vacation time money. The reason I make this request is due to the fact that I have not taken a vacation within the past 2 years and 8 months. It is my understading that unused vacation time is made payable to us at our request.

I am hopeful that you will look into this matter right away and compensate me accordingly.

Should you have any questions feel free to contact me at your earliest convenience.

Cordially,

Tom Beganda

Answer 2

Are waiters given paid vacations?


Date

Manager's Name, Title
Company Name
1234 Street
City, State Zip

Dear Mr. X:

After working for this company as a waiter for two years and eight months, I believe it is time I am given another paid vacation leave.

Your prompt attention to this matter will be greatly appreciated.

Very truly yours,

Your Name

Answer 3

The letter is good, but unless it was in your hiring contract that they give you money in place of vacation days, you won't be getting any money. However, you can insist that you get your vacation days for the past two years, and take them!

Answer 4

It's ok...but it might help if you put the dates of the vacation and that you never received your vacation pay on your check...send a copy to your supervisor and or department manager as well as one to accounting..

Answer 5

I think you need to use the world respond instead of action..
Your necessary respond will be highly appreciated!!