Is my Publication/Article well written?

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See it at http://www.wen2k.com/tell.php?Id=1082 , let me know what you think. Herbert West III www.west.herb@yahoo.com

2006-11-27 15:39:30 · 1 answers · asked by west.herb@yahoo.com 4 in Politics & Government ➔ Other - Politics & Government

You capitalize words that shouldn't be (staff, members) and start a lot of sentences with "I...". For it to flow better, use some variety.

2006-11-27 20:08:49 · answer #1 · answered by JSB 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋