Swollow Hard
You swollowed the posion pill
Said it made you fell better still
Come on baby give me one more shot
This time give it all youve got
Your so polluted
And Im so misunderstood
Your so premeditating
And I just letter rip
Im just searching for some soul
On a satuerday night
Your just feeding off of mine
And baby thats not right
We can do the shadow dance
We can fake our lost romance
We can love into the night
We can make whats wrong go right
We are all just posers and players
Fallen dancers and forgotten arrangers
We show the passion in our eyes
Paying for the delusions of our lie
Come unto the breast of our god
Repay the things that your forgot
Live a life in paradise
Without accepting the higher price
How can you just walk away
From the conviction in my eyes
How can you ever deny
The rumors that you bought
You swollowed the posion pill
Said it made you fell better still
Come on baby give me one more shot
This time give it all youve got
JEB@94
2006-11-27 14:06:44 · 3 answers · asked by atomic49er 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Sounds pretty good to me.
It would make a good rap song.
What do you think??
2006-11-27 14:10:28 · answer #1 · answered by nevada nomad 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's good. I would give it an 88.9 percent out of 100 percent.
2006-11-27 14:09:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it's great. i felt the words, ya know? keep writing!!!
:-)
2006-11-27 14:25:59 · answer #3 · answered by ididElvis 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋