One night a guy & a girl were driving home from the movies. The
girl sensed there was something wrong because of the painful
silence they shared between them that night. The guy pulled over and told the girl he wanted to talk. He told her that his feelings had changed & that it was time to move on. A silent tear slid down her cheek as she slowly reached into her pocket & passed him a folded note. At that moment, a drunk driver was speeding down that very same street. He swerved
right into the girls side, killing the girl. Miraculously, the guy survived. Remembering the note, he pulled it out & read it.
"Without your love, I would die."
isn't that amazing? my friend wrote it a couple weeks ago.
2006-11-27 13:41:21 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Actually, I think your friend has a gift for writing, and should copywrite that before someone tries to steal it. That's a beautiful little story.
2006-11-27 13:49:10 · answer #1 · answered by WHITE TRASH ARMENIAN 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its quite abruptly ending if you ask me, a little elaboration could've done it alot of good. Give your friend some advice on that, tell her/him that the theme and main idea is great, but the ending is quite sudden.
All the more better though, its a great piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Things don't happen coincedently, they always have a meaning.
2006-11-27 13:48:50 · answer #2 · answered by Sakura 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maybe I'm just a grouch, but I thought it was funny. Those little stories don't really affect me since I see those type of things in chain letters all the time.
2006-11-27 13:45:42 · answer #3 · answered by i luv teh fishes 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's pretty good. It reminds me of the short story graphic novel collection I just read with the irony in the ending.
2006-11-27 13:47:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I doubt she wrote it; I've seen it much earlier than this month in myspace bulletins, like a damn plague!
I think nothing of it, to be honest, due to that fact; overexposure makes it lose it's meaning.
2006-11-27 14:02:19 · answer #5 · answered by Mimsical 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Quite freaky .
2006-11-27 13:44:19 · answer #6 · answered by Geedebb 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well she got what she wanted , right? I wouldn't call it amazing, juvenile maybe.
2006-11-27 13:45:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
true life story
2006-11-27 13:44:47 · answer #8 · answered by george p 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is really touching. it's sad but i love it.
2006-11-27 13:43:32 · answer #9 · answered by Liv 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋