The Bubble Poem
When I'm bored, I blow bubbles,
Makes the world more beautiful,
Didn’t really know bubbles have that effect.
Bubbles reflect my state of mind.
It's always colorful, except it blows up sometimes.
2006-11-26 18:49:48 · 13 answers · asked by Rollercoaster 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
i like it and it's pretty damn deep especially the ending... that s only to someone who would understand there is a different meaning behind even the sillies sounding things and sometimes they really are real...
2006-11-26 18:52:02 · answer #1 · answered by heclee 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
your poem is not so touching has there is no rhyming word.some check thisone;
BUBBLES
Din't really know bubbles have that effect,
Bubbles reflect everybodys mind perfect.
It's always colorful and beautifull,
which makes itself so attractful.
2006-11-27 03:06:12 · answer #2 · answered by shabnum k 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the way the meaning is sooo deeply hidden. It's very nice. Well, good luck, hope you write more. ^_^
2006-11-27 06:21:37 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is pretty cool,
tried to get the meaning of it
2006-11-27 02:57:05 · answer #4 · answered by Flyweesh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i amnot poetic at all , but i like reading ur poem , its sweet and simple and easy to understand
2006-11-27 03:03:30 · answer #5 · answered by tricksy52002 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LIKE BUBBLES ! LIKE WHEN YOU MAKE THEM IN THE BATH TUB^^
2006-11-27 02:52:09 · answer #6 · answered by dextermatthew 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a lot of bubbles...
2006-11-27 02:51:11 · answer #7 · answered by imegalihimera 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's cute.
2006-11-27 02:51:28 · answer #8 · answered by star_puk 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, that is not a poem.
2006-11-27 02:58:51 · answer #9 · answered by no nickname 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
again... doesn't sound much like poetry to me
2006-11-27 03:02:58 · answer #10 · answered by Just-Another-Sombody 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋