I wanted freedom
bound and restricted
I tried to give you up
but I'm addicted
now that you know I'm trapped sense of elation
you'd never dream of
breaking this fixation
♥
2006-11-26 13:18:47 · 16 answers · asked by Youngling 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
thanks everyone, but your missing the point (no offense at all!). keep trying =D
2006-11-26 13:33:34 · update #1
I love ur poem!
2006-11-27 07:10:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The iambic pentameter could use a little fine-tuning, but is this the resolution you seek?
2006-11-26 21:27:13 · answer #2 · answered by Dee 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Are you asking what we think? If so, then I think it's nice it's very true of a relationship I'm in!
2006-11-26 21:24:34 · answer #3 · answered by Mrs. EV 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
Who came here to read poems?
and who has been annoyed by you?
2006-11-26 21:21:14 · answer #4 · answered by Charisma 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
That's beautiful... *cries* Very nice work.
2006-11-26 21:28:29 · answer #5 · answered by Rei-chan 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes that is really nice
2006-11-26 21:32:39 · answer #6 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Are you talking about Yahoo answers?
2006-11-26 21:27:01 · answer #7 · answered by Marenight 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice poem
2006-11-26 21:20:14 · answer #8 · answered by naomihank 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. I like it.
2006-11-26 21:21:00 · answer #9 · answered by ~Kricket~ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think we all feel like that about Y!A
2006-11-26 21:20:45 · answer #10 · answered by meg (on Violet Hill) 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋