i need to reword sentences, but how do you re-word that? thanks.
2006-11-26 11:30:39 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
maybe it's a trick sentence?
2006-11-26 11:32:30 · answer #1 · answered by emma 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are some basic problems with the sentence. First of all, an atmosphere is not a feeling, so you need another term for that. Secondly, new friends aren't an atmosphere! It also isn't clear what you were devoted to - the team, the friends, the sport?. Therefore, the best I can do is, "Attending daily team practices in such a friendly atmosphere, I felt a new devotion to the sport.
2006-11-26 19:41:59 · answer #2 · answered by neniaf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I felt an immense atmosphere of friendship and devotion after attending daily practices with the team. Is that what you mean?
2006-11-26 19:35:08 · answer #3 · answered by lisalisa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋