My friend wrote a poem and we can't think of any good titles..so if you can think of any good one's please tell me. And Im serious, so if you're going to put a dumb answer please leave.
I never meant to hurt you.
I never wanted you to cry.
I never meant the things I said.
If only you knew why....
You made living life so hard
And at times I wanted to quite.
You made me what I am today
And you still blame them for it.
I never lived up to your expectations.
I was always one step below.
And although I tried to make you proud.
It never really showed.
You always made me feel worthless.
Why was I even there?
You made me last in life
Yet, you still didn't care.
But through all the pain you caused me
I still loved you inside.
You might have never saw it.
Whatever. You didn't try.
2006-11-26 09:32:12 · 21 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
"Futile"
I like the poem.
2006-11-26 09:36:30 · answer #1 · answered by stargazerjimbo 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Sorrowful Life
2006-11-26 17:35:19 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I have two things with this. This is a pretty good poem. The title I would have entitled this would be, "Expectations".
Secondly, I would not have put the ending as Whatever, Its seems to have disrupted the entire poem. What sounds good to me when reading would have been, "However, you didn't even try." Just my opinion.
Thanks.
2006-11-26 17:39:38 · answer #3 · answered by Michael P 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Loved You Inside
I Never Meant It
I Loved You...Why?
2006-11-26 17:38:14 · answer #4 · answered by Me & Me 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
A Child's Lament
2006-11-26 17:35:32 · answer #5 · answered by prairiegurrl 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
.wow , i like this poem it pretty much sum up how badly a person as been treated within a relationship not sure if how i would name it but here,s some idea,s
hard times
blameless
bad love
hurting me
2006-11-26 17:43:27 · answer #6 · answered by lizella 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Behind Me
2006-11-26 17:35:31 · answer #7 · answered by pppersephone06 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Honestly, as a writer myself, I believe she/he should be creative and brainstorm and find a title - in the end, it will bring your friend greater satisfaction than asking on-line!
2006-11-26 17:36:02 · answer #8 · answered by Seeker 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
the poem is so great
and its quit not quite i guess ya missed typin it
well
the name "ur expectations" is nice
"blame" ,"u didn't try" "worthless " and "the pain u caused me "
tell ur friend to keep it up
its great i liked it
2006-11-26 17:59:05 · answer #9 · answered by alexandre 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how's about.. Poem From A Person Who Can't Speak For Herself....
2006-11-26 17:34:43 · answer #10 · answered by Traynor 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Never
You use that word so much use it as a title!
2006-11-26 17:35:05 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋