The importance of family is undeniably expressed in many ways by Homer throughout “The Odyssey” using characterization, Odysseus, through his nostalgic feelings while on Ogygia and when in the underworld where he wept when he saw his dead mother, Telemachos, through his brave journey to find out about his missing father, and Penelope, through her plan to deceive the suitors to not marry her yet and by her constant weeping for Odysseus and Telemachos.
2006-11-26 06:30:31 · 12 answers · asked by teddybears 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
I'm not doing your homework for you, sorry.
And as for people saying that obviously the person has done their homework - what if the assignment is to correct the grammar?
Sorry if that's a stretch for some.
2006-11-26 06:37:37 · answer #1 · answered by Jane D 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
The importance of family is undeniably expressed in many ways by Homer throughout “The Odyssey.”
Using characterization, Odysseus, through his nostalgic feelings while on Ogygia and when in the underworld, where he wept when seeing his dead mother.
Telemachos, through his brave journey to find out about his missing father.
Penelope, through her plan to deceive the suitors into not yet marrying her, as well as through her constant weeping for Odysseus and Telemachos.
You're going to get a lot of takes on this one!
2006-11-26 06:42:45 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
The paragraph has lots of problems grammatically. The only complete sentence (it has a subject and subject verb) ends with characterization. The other three clauses Odysseus - dead mother, Telemachos - father, and Penelope - Telemachos, are not complete sentences, either together or by themselves. The single best choice, keeping this paragraph together, is to use a colon : after characterization, a semi-colon after Odysseus - mother and continue the comma after missing father.
2006-11-26 07:57:44 · answer #3 · answered by beastmom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Obviously he did his own homework and just wants someone to proofread it. What's wrong with that? Nothing.
That's a really big run-on sentence and it doesn't flow very well. There should be a period after characterization. Splitting it into several sentences would be a better idea. And also, giving a little more detail.
2006-11-26 06:41:55 · answer #4 · answered by LexiSan 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
That para is written generally relating to IT language and txt spk. You instructors have make it easier to down in the event that they have not advised you the version between your toddlers's slang and solid English.
2016-10-13 03:52:40 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Copy and paste it into Microsoft Word. Then run a spelling and grammar check.
2006-11-26 11:44:46 · answer #6 · answered by The Doctor 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Long rambling sentence. Break it down into small understandable parts.
2006-11-26 07:44:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice try but there are certain homework assignments you need to do yourself if you are going to learn.
2006-11-26 11:39:19 · answer #8 · answered by Marvin R 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is what we call a "run-on sentence."
Also, "plz" is definitely NOT grammatically correct.
2006-11-26 06:39:24 · answer #9 · answered by Nuala 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
perfect grammar
2006-11-26 06:37:45 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋