I just wrote it today. i also got a copywrite on it too!
Its called: Good Bye Friends
What a true site
With all the might
i just had a fight
and it was not right.
I get kept from with secrets behind my back
Kept by 2 peoople that look bad
U keep it up
im the strong one
im stronger...i can walk away
If u have a problem
then so be it
If u like me
Then be friend.
A true friend never keeps a secret from another friend
One way or another its gonna come out
whether u see my reaction or not.
Keep it up!
Im more strong!!
You will know it when the time comes.
Im walking away
I won't be back
Say "see you later"
Because you will soon realize it will come out
The truth i mean, that will be out!
Im leaving-good bye
See u in the after life
I am better off without you
I can survive without you
I don't feed off your B.S.
It was a matter of time...and it that ran out
See ya later good bye im gone
I hope u feel bad for what u have done
2006-11-26 03:24:47 · 15 answers · asked by ♥mcmanda♥ 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Im stronger than u can say im not
i can walk away and u will not
A secret so childish so dumb
So grow up and act like ur age
This is life deal with its downs
You say im a liar
But i am not
How do you know i am or not?
Don't point your finger its not nice
I wouldn't do it if i had the choice
All the blame all the fights
All the crap i was put through all night
I don't need you as a friend
i can do much better
I can do more better than u can
Good bye see you later
im out of sight
Because ur not nice
Your being 2 faced and its not right
a friend never calls another a scrub
i tried my best...i tried my hardest...
u never excepted me what i was before
Its all change...thats life as it may seem
Im not as good as you tasted me before
im bitter and sour but so sweet
Not sweet to you because you made my mouth go dry
I asked something
what did i get?
Nothing right away
Nothing at all.
Get away from me
im better off
you need to realize that it was not right
2006-11-26 03:25:39 · update #1
pick pick pick
lie after lie
im sick of your bull sh*t
I don't need another try
Good bye for now
good bye forever
im gone and i don't need you any longer
Its better said and done
Than no say at all
All i had to do was make my decision after all!
Look at me now...
im no longer torn apart.
My g*d grow up and see
Grow up and act your age
Im more stronger than you may see
im stonger than you may talk to me
Im stronger...with vision than you may see
Good Bye may not be forever
For i am gone from you forever
Look what u did!?!
You lost a friend
Regrets you made the decision u had done
Its a wonder no why your jaded.
Good bye...im gone
Kiss my a**
It all was wrong
I walked away
And you can at all
Take a look and see
For all you are doing to me
Don't come cry to me
im not your friend and never was in the start
Im not longer in harm...
Keeping my self from your back fires
2006-11-26 03:27:01 · update #2
You talked about me behind my back
Oh all the Wonderful things you never said
A friend never calls a friend anynames
A friend is someone who is gonna be there for me.
Good bye im gone
Have a bad life
Im more better than your own lieing words
than you looking at my face and believing your everyword
You lieing f*** im better off
Im more better and you knew that more
Im not childish
Im not the person who won't accept a sorry
Im at least someone who can forgive you and take your sorry
Im someone who if i didn't want to be your friend
i would at least say so.
Good bye is not forever...
For all you are is gone and gone forever
No after life for you and me
Soon you'll see what you did to me.
Good Bye Good Bye
I leave today
Never get a hold of me
Im done
im gone
This is my final bye
No friend is a friend who keeps a secret that is a lie
Good bye you f***ers im gone and out
You using toothpick lovers
Go on and get back to work
Im gotta life better off with out you
I hope you realize what
2006-11-26 03:28:29 · update #3
Good bye im gone
Have a bad life
Im more better than your own lieing words
than you looking at my face and believing your everyword
You lieing f*** im better off
Im more better and you knew that more
Im not childish
Im not the person who won't accept a sorry
Im at least someone who can forgive you and take your sorry
Im someone who if i didn't want to be your friend
i would at least say so.
Good bye is not forever...
For all you are is gone and gone forever
No after life for you and me
Soon you'll see what you did to me.
Good Bye Good Bye
I leave today
Never get a hold of me
Im done
im gone
This is my final bye
No friend is a friend who keeps a secret that is a lie
Good bye you f***ers im gone and out
You using toothpick lovers
Go on and get back to work
Im gotta life better off with out you
I hope you realize what i gone through
I
2006-11-26 03:30:00 · update #4
I asked one thing and i never got it
I get picked and called some "stalker"
You try to make me look worse
When all you are doing is making yourself worse.
Good Bye im gone and forever
Have a good life and grow up cuz i gone forever
Ill be back...but maybe never
Only if you can say your sorry.
Bye good bye to you all
Never God bless upon those souls
Please bless me because i deserve it
I deserved a chance i never got
Good bye you old "friends" i thought u were
Good bye for all i was there for
My love and pain has faded away
Thanks to you i know i can live another day!
2006-11-26 03:30:31 · update #5
* That is a very nice poem. Try and submit it online to win a award.*
2006-11-26 03:26:35 · answer #1 · answered by bor_rabnud 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. No. It is not a good "poem." It's not even a good text message.
2. To find out what good poetry is, you have to read good poetry.
3. You can't just regurgitate your emotions using IM spelling and atrocious grammar, make a few of the end words rhyme, and call it "poetry." Poetry involves taking your experiences and crafting them into something lovely, with concern for every part of the expression.
2006-11-26 15:07:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not inevitably ought to rhyme inspite of the undeniable fact that it needs to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is significant besides. i do no longer prefer to 2nd wager what i'm analyzing approximately. I consistently seek for what I term "poetic gem stones"in the text textile.
2016-10-17 13:51:47 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is such a deep poem. You should enter it into a contest, I bet you'd win. Anybody that says "pretty" good is insane. That was beautiful. It reminds me of my life and all the troubles I have with my friend Mandy. Good Job!
2006-11-26 04:16:21 · answer #4 · answered by Alexa 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
There is a lot of hurt coming through your poem and I'm sorry to hear that. I don't know if it really is a friend or some adult that has hurt you and quite badly but please don't do anything to yourself.Some day they will have to pay for their harm.Don't harm yourself. There are lots of people that do care about you and I'm one of them.
2006-11-26 03:33:19 · answer #5 · answered by tea cup 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I didn't even want to read it all...... it sounds like alot of anger written down , good for you to vent but not share
2006-11-26 03:36:38 · answer #6 · answered by sparkle 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds cathartic. I'm sure there are far too many people who should read this poem.
2006-11-26 03:29:29 · answer #7 · answered by jmiller 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's pretty good
2006-11-26 12:54:33 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful! at the begining i think i
know how u feel and your pain
Merry christmas
2006-11-26 03:26:59 · answer #9 · answered by turboprincess1 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good!
2006-11-26 03:27:07 · answer #10 · answered by Maddie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋