- In 1967 a profile of the plant for several dozen yaers was defined.
- In 1969 further modernization of the machinery park followed
Could you please take a look at the sentencec below and improve them to make them sound more natural in English. thanks a lot in advance
- In 1970 the product offering started to develop contiuously.
- Linings are indispensable part of clothes. They fit for women’s, men’s and teenagers’ wear both in summer and winter collections and make clothes elegant, delicate, easier to wear and functional.
2006-11-26 00:52:58 · 6 answers · asked by AsMa 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
could you please check my sentences and improve them so that they sound more natural un English? thanks a lot
2006-11-26 00:58:25 · update #1
sure, i'll have a go.....
- In 1967, the plant's profile was defined forseveral decades.
- In 1969, further modernisation of the machinery park took place
- In 1970, the product continued to develop.
- Linings are an indispensable part of clothes. They are used for women's, men's and tennager's clothing, both in summer and winter collections. Linings make clotheselegant, delicate, easier to wear and functional.
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I've made a few adjustments, but overall what you already had was pretty good. for the first point, i wasn't quite sure what you were trying to say, but i've tried my best to enhance the sentences.
2006-11-26 01:02:13 · answer #1 · answered by FreakGirl 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
In 1967 a profile of the plant, for many years, was defined.
In 1969 further modernization, of the machinery, followed.
In 1970 the product development commenced.
Linings are an indespensible part of clothing. It makes womens, mens and teenagers clothes look better. More elegant and delicate. It also make clothes more comfortable to wear in both the Summer and Winter collections.
I hope the above suggestions are useful...Good luck.
2006-11-26 01:13:24 · answer #2 · answered by alisonpenn48 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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- In 1970 (or In the 1970´s) product offers started to develop contiuously.
- Lining is an indispensable part of clothing. They can be fit for women, men and teenagers, and used for both summer and winter collections. Lining makes clothes elegant, delicate, easier to wear and more functional
Hope it is OK
BR
San2
2006-11-26 01:03:05 · answer #3 · answered by San2 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In 1970 the product offering started to develop contiuously.Linings are (an) indispensable part of clothes. They (are )fitted on women’s, men’s and teenagers’ clothes . They are worn both in summer and winter collections and they make clothes elegant, delicate, easier to wear and functional.
2006-11-26 01:00:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
In 1970, the offering of products started to continually develop.
-Linings are an indespensible part of clothing. They can be used in both winter and summer collections for all cothing lines including those for women, men and teenagers. Linings not only allow clothes to appear more elegant and delicate but are also easier to wear. The functionality of linings are far superior to anything previously used.
2006-11-26 01:03:41 · answer #5 · answered by sioballen 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
What's the question..?
2006-11-26 00:55:26 · answer #6 · answered by ~Grace~ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋